Something came up, sory cn’t makeit. – Gary
Abby ponders the text, and her evening gladness relinquishes to sadness. A voice hisses, “I told you so. You are not popular. Your date doesn’t even want to see you.” The dead words drift . . . . . linger. . . . . and settle in her heart. Despondency is now the victor emotion.
The invisible Remmel, a 2nd grade thought perverter receives another “Atta demon” from its trainer. Remmel fertilizes the planted thought and whispers, “Alone again.”
Abby’s heart aches.
The trainer spies Tirzah’s rocketing advance, spiritual battle is assured.
– 100 words –
Friday Fictioneers, led by the admirable Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, invites 100 word stories in response to a photo prompt submitted by members of the group. Why not join us? Thank you Dale Rogerson for the Photo Prompt.
Living In Eternity 
Dear Dan,
This feels a lot like Screwtape letters. Oh the things we don’t see in the spiritual dimension. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I too focused on the light fixtures, but nothing came to me. Now Crinoline is so obvious. Love your stories, have fun at the book signing.
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Weird and interesting story. Well done.
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Thanks Jilly. Yes the spirit dimension is pretty weird.
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What a horrid doohicky that Remmel is…
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Thanks for checking out “Text msg” Dale. Oh yes, Remmel and her side kicks are horrid. Believe it.
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So emotive. Poor Abby.
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I did not like seeing Abby get hurt. Gary was being very self centered. Remmel took advantage of the situation. Abby is a good person.
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Spiritual warfare at a tangible level. Very nice take on the prompt.
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Thanks Linda.
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